Community Building, Storytelling Strategy
4 Ways to Drive Donor Loyalty with Honest Communications
Donors want to know how their contributions impact beneficiaries. One of the best ways to communicate your nonprofit’s work is through ethical, data-driven storytelling.
In a report from MemoryFox, 42% of nonprofit professionals stated that compelling, honest communications like ethical storytelling help them raise more money. But when asked how prepared they were to implement these strategies, respondents primarily said they felt “a little equipped,” citing challenges like a lack of training and formal processes for sourcing and telling stories.
In this guide, we’ll review four strategies your nonprofit can use to create transparent communications for its digital fundraising and marketing campaigns.
1. Embrace ethical storytelling.
People are naturally drawn to stories, and incorporating them into your communication strategy can engage donors. In fact, nonprofits that use storytelling have an average retention rate of 45%, compared to only 27% at organizations that don’t.
Your organization should commit to honoring beneficiaries’ stories and maintaining their privacy and dignity. Never sensationalize, exploit, or fabricate these stories for the sake of donations, or you risk your organization’s reputation and beneficiaries’ trust. Instead, follow these rules of thumb for ethical storytelling:
- Obtain consent. Always obtain explicit, informed consent before sharing stories. Clearly explain why you are gathering the stories, how they will be used, where they will appear, and what audiences you’ll target.
- Use strength-based language. Adopt language that focuses on the existing strengths and capabilities of the individual and communities you’re centering in your narrative. For example, trade out a deficit-based term like “under-represented” with “historically excluded.” Assess whether the individual in your story is positioned as a main subject with agency and resilience or is a victim or passive recipient of aid.
- Avoid stereotypes. Sometimes, stereotypes and stigmatizing language are included in stories accidentally due to subconscious bias or ignorance. Consult with individuals from relevant communities to ensure the story is told accurately and respectfully.
- Incorporate a review step. Finally, give each storyteller the opportunity to review the story you wrote. They deserve a chance to weigh in on how you’ll frame their words and experiences before presenting them to an audience.
Provide support for beneficiaries who decide to share their stories. Telling emotional stories and reliving difficult or traumatizing events can be taxing, so make sure individuals have a safe space to process their feelings after doing so.
2. Showcase the human impact of donations.
Donors want to know what their contributions accomplish and see the direct impact of their support. Storytelling techniques are one of the most compelling ways to convey this information.
Keeping ethical considerations front of mind, write an engaging impact story by:
- Acknowledging the donor’s impact by using phrases like “Your support brought much-needed disaster relief to the area” rather than “We used donations to fund our disaster relief efforts.”
- Incorporating visuals like images, graphics, videos, and charts to show the tangible impact of donors’ support on beneficiaries.
- Featuring statistics and success metrics to communicate impact and maintain transparency.
- Rolling the stories out across various channels to create an omni-channel approach. As Allegiance Group + Pursuant explains, omni-channel campaigns are a personalized marketing approach that helps you build relationships with donors, boost conversions, maximize your resources, and capture valuable engagement opportunities.
Combined with ethical considerations, these strategies will help you craft stories that communicate your impact, foster trust, and persuade your supporters to engage more deeply.
3. Communicate transparently.
It can be scary to share details about your nonprofit publicly, but your supporters will appreciate your willingness to share information about your finances, impact, and even mistakes. With a consistent dedication to transparency, supporters will view your nonprofit as an open and honest organization they feel safe contributing to.
To cultivate their trust, your nonprofit should share:
- Audited financial statements. Supporters want to know where their money goes, and sharing your financial records and accounting practices is one of the best ways to do so. Share financial statements that have been audited by an independent certified public accountant (CPA) to verify your financial records and demonstrate compliance with Generally Accepted Accounting Principles (GAAP).
- Program updates. Frequently update supporters on your programs, using data to support the updates when possible. For example, share a monthly update on how many people your food pantry feeds. Incorporate photos, videos, and testimonials where possible so supporters can visualize your impact.
- Your mistakes (and how you overcame them). Don’t try to bury your mistakes. Instead, openly acknowledge missteps or times when you fell short of your goals and review how it happened. Identify the root cause of each mistake and explain what you are doing to ensure success in the future.
To showcase your reputability, consider sharing scores or certifications from organizations that rate charities, such as Charity Navigator and Candid. These organizations rate nonprofits based on various criteria, from workplace culture to tax forms to compensation transparency.
For example, the Global Fund for Women scored 100% on Charity Navigator, meaning it satisfied a variety of criteria associated with accountability, tax form disclosures and policies, and financial metrics.
4. Personalize donor communications.
You can build trust by forging individual relationships with each donor. By sending messages that are relevant to each donor’s personal interests and giving motivations, you show that you acknowledge and appreciate their past efforts. This leads to increased trust and loyalty.
Segment donors based on key factors like their engagement history, giving level, demographic data, and more to personalize communications on a large scale. Then, individualize aspects of each message like:
- Communication channel. Reach out via the communication channel each donor prefers. For example, donor preferences will dictate whether you send them a thank-you letter or email.
- Recognition. When recognizing a supporter’s contributions, highlight their past donations, event attendance, or volunteer efforts, as well as the impact that support had on your programs.
- Engagement opportunities and invitations. Keep engagement levels high by recommending other ways the donor might want to get involved. Be transparent about your needs—for example, let them know that you don’t have enough volunteers to effectively serve the community.
Taking the time to create personalized messages over a traditional, mass-market approach shows that you value donors as individuals, further enhancing your reputation in their eyes.
As a nonprofit, your reputation as an honest, mission-focused organization that delivers on its promises is one of your most valuable assets. The key to building and maintaining that reputation is creating engaging, ethical communications that remind donors how much you value their individual contributions.

About the Author
Liz Murphy
EVP, Allegiance+Pursuant Group
Liz Murphy is an EVP at Allegiance+Pursuant Group, a direct response fundraising agency and technology company. Liz has more than 30 years of experience growing digital and integrated fundraising and communications programs for social justice, health, and international relief nonprofit organizations.
Liz is an award-winning copywriter and is a frequent speaker at industry conferences, including ANA, DMAW, Bridge, and NTC. She is also a member of the Board of Directors of the Direct Marketing Association of Washington Educational Foundation.